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Be Careful What You Say

Posted by eddie secretary from Torfaen - Published on 07/12/2011 at 11:56
4 comments » - Tagged as Creative Writing, People, Topical

I lost my friend today,
I lost the love I hold dear,
I lost her because
I said something I shouldn't have.

I lost her because I didn't trust her
with my whole heart,
I lost my friend today,
I lost her forever,

I lost her smile,
I lost her jokes,
Her laughter,
And her friendship,

Be careful what you say today,
For you may lose your friend today,
Be careful what you say!
I wasn't and I lost my friend today.

Signed,
The upset, friendless, eddie secretary

Commented 5 months ago - 7th December 2011 - 11:55am

Oh no! :( Is this a true poem?

Commented 5 months ago - 7th December 2011 - 12:03pm

this is a true poem yes, but after much grovvelling and begging for forgiveness, my friend is my friend once more,

and i am now a happy bunny hehe

Commented 5 months ago - 7th December 2011 - 22:07pm

Too bad happy poems don't have the same quality sad ones do!

Commented 5 months ago - 8th December 2011 - 14:44pm

i know #MarshMallo, Sad Poems are so good at evoking emotions and making people think, where as happy poems,just make peole giggle at times

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